Great art, loved the live2D animation, the story is extremely enjoyable albeit kind of hard to enjoy in English, would love to see a full version of the story, so many questions unanswered!
Thank you for your feedback! This is our first job and we are delighted that you have enjoyed it. We will take into account all shortcomings (especially translation) in the future.
Good job on your first visual novel, Jackie and Zhilinkova!
The art was really pretty and the visual effects looked very professionally done as well. The music was fine, why'd you say sorry? Lol. I however feel like the story was a bit too rushed, I wish it was more elaborate and that we'd get to know the characters better since this had potential to be a very intriguing read. The English translation could use some more polishing and editing tbh, it sounded pretty awkward even though it was some good effort.
The lack of a skip button or any configurations would've seriously bugged me if this game wasn't so short. I enjoyed playing this (but I wish it was longer though), thank you for creating this game and I'll be keeping an eye out for your future projects!
P/S: I'm a bit of a writer/editor myself so if you need any help in the future, I'll be right here to lend a hand! Have a lovely day~
Thanks for your feedback! Your words are very inspiring.
About the music. I am not a musician and have never done anything musical. I have created music for visual novel in 2 days literally. I am just glad that it does not sound super lousy (:))
Yes, this is our first visual novel and it could have been better. I know it. We will try to be better in the future. Thank you for playing it!
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I enjoyed this game! A great visual novel.
Thank you very much =)))
Great art, loved the live2D animation, the story is extremely enjoyable albeit kind of hard to enjoy in English, would love to see a full version of the story, so many questions unanswered!
Keep the good work!
Thank you for your feedback! This is our first job and we are delighted that you have enjoyed it. We will take into account all shortcomings (especially translation) in the future.
Thank you for playing!
Good job on your first visual novel, Jackie and Zhilinkova!
The art was really pretty and the visual effects looked very professionally done as well. The music was fine, why'd you say sorry? Lol. I however feel like the story was a bit too rushed, I wish it was more elaborate and that we'd get to know the characters better since this had potential to be a very intriguing read. The English translation could use some more polishing and editing tbh, it sounded pretty awkward even though it was some good effort.
The lack of a skip button or any configurations would've seriously bugged me if this game wasn't so short. I enjoyed playing this (but I wish it was longer though), thank you for creating this game and I'll be keeping an eye out for your future projects!
P/S: I'm a bit of a writer/editor myself so if you need any help in the future, I'll be right here to lend a hand! Have a lovely day~
Thanks for your feedback! Your words are very inspiring.
About the music. I am not a musician and have never done anything musical.
I have created music for visual novel in 2 days literally. I am just glad that it does not sound super lousy (:))
Yes, this is our first visual novel and it could have been better. I know it. We will try to be better in the future.
Thank you for playing it!
That's very impressive, I thought the music was very fitting with the setting and the mood of the story. You've got serious talent, keep at it ♥